Peer review T3 12/09/16 (Dave)

https://s00156364.wordpress.com/2016/08/29/marriage-of-heaven-and-hell/

Hi Dave! I love this entry of yours, the analogies that you make are creative. The rotten apple made me laugh a bit! I like the comparison that you make between the different world cultures including their respective religious backgrounds towards their view about nudity. It’s interesting, since, as I was born naked, I feel that nudity is only natural and good. In fact, in all things in their natural states of being I can see only pure goodness. Instead, I find that the “bad” is always linked to the human interpretation itself. That is probably why I decided to trust only the law of nature and to actively reject all human laws. No man can tell me what is good from bad because no man is god. No one rules me but god. Also, since I am an expression of the universe, since I am aware of that, hence, I am god! Therefore, the capacity to reason (the only thing that makes me different from a beast) suffices to give reason to my everyday actions whatever they might be. I have no regrets but only experiences. I learn from my mistakes, that is evolution. I love your blog my friend, the quotes you took from the bible and the examples you provided reach to give a grasp of the true nature of ‘morality’. Well done : )

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One thought on “Peer review T3 12/09/16 (Dave)

  1. A beautiful peer review Tibby! I am sure David was stoked by your close reading of his text! Great work. Expression needs a little fine-tuning here and there:

    *Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
    * comparaison = comparison
    * their respective religious background= their respective religious backgrounds [Agreement of Subject and Verb. Plural nouns need plural verbs and singular nouns need singular verbs. What should this be? http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/595/01/%5D
    * Therefore, the capacity to reason ….suffice to give reason = Therefore, the capacity to reason…. suffices to give reason [Agreement of Subject and Verb. Plural nouns need plural verbs and singular nouns need singular verbs. What should this be? http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/595/01/%5D

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